Ariyana, I love the way you have sequenced the events in this story. You have a clear beginning, middle and end. I would love to know more about your adventure. What do you feel as you stepped onto the rainbow? How did the things below you look? What was at the other end of the rainbow? Keep up the great blogging from Mrs Carruthers
Ariyana, I love the way you have sequenced the events in this story. You have a clear beginning, middle and end. I would love to know more about your adventure. What do you feel as you stepped onto the rainbow? How did the things below you look? What was at the other end of the rainbow?
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yes miss i will thank you.
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